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Cut, Bleed, Repeat
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:46:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Deep inside I still seem to hurt
Deep inside I know these feelings still lerk
I never though I'd feel this again
I had hoped the pain would end
But I was wrong, it's not the first
For my razor I begin to thirst
I hold it gently in my hand
And look at the scars that no one understands
I roll up my sleeve and look at my skin
This shiny razor is so thin
I look at my scars from all the times before
With one cut above the clouds I soar
The blood rushes to the surface, such a beautiful sight
I feel at peace and know my action is right
Another slice, another scar
Another time things went too far
More blood lost, my wound begins to heal
But it won't be long until this again is real
Don't ask what's wrong, don't look into my mind
All the answers you'll never find
My mind is disturbed, you don't need to know anything else
If you don't leave I'll slit your throat and put the blood filled jar on my shelf
These feelings are too much, I need another way
You can't imagine the things I need to say
Why can't you leave me alone and let me be me
Cut me loose and set me free
Another slice with more blood to come
Deep enough to still bleed at morning's sun
Deep enough for stitches, but I'll never go
I'd rather let the blood continue to flow.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-01-03 04:46:13]
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Re: Cut, Bleed, Repeat
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by StarBeneathTheStairs on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:59:43 AM AEST
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Wow I'm loving this poem...very dark and emotional, sounds a bit like some of my stuff.
Also helps that I can sorta relate to how this person's feeling...
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Re: Cut, Bleed, Repeat
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by SuicidalSon on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:15:08 AM AEST
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Smack the flesh and watch it bleed
this life is a test its what you need
Death obsessed is worse than greed
This poem's the best and all should read
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Re: Cut, Bleed, Repeat
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 12:16:08 PM AEST
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strong, and very messed up!
I like :) |
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Re: Cut, Bleed, Repeat
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:20:16 PM AEST
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I really like this! The, uh, throat-slitting, blood filled jar part was unexpected... lol... I love it though, it comforted me in a strange way. *shrugs* don't ask coz I don't know :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Cut, Bleed, Repeat
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:17:24 PM AEST
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| don't know what to say again..... what was wrong? why don't you want people's help??? The blood can not flow forever........ |
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