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Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me
Contributed by
Aika
on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:08:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Lem doma v posteli
Nemoc mě skltila
Přemlm,kde jste vichni vy,
A proč tam nejsem j
Projdu se k oknu,
Byl hav letn den
A teď k večeru
Na obloze mraky jen
Nhle se snesl jako modlitba
dť zprvu jemn,
okna se dotkm,
prahnu po tom, co uvidm
Jak krsně roztančily se kapky
Na okno mi pou vzkaz
Čekme tě, prme tady
Pojď sem tančit mezi ns
Slza po tvři stekla,
Odepsala deti
Tak rda bych k vm vběhla
Jsem sevřen,jak v kletch
Minul tden jsme si hrli
Tys deti miliny vzkazů psal
Na m tělo, aty smčel
A z vky ses na mě sml
Jen je mi teď o moc krsněji
Pr, ctm tě na těle
Tv tepl kapky
Pou dl na okno uzdrav se
I am at home in the bed
Disease laid me down
Thinking where you went
And why could not go I
Walking to the window
It was a hot summer day
Now, in the late afternoon
Only clouds in the sky
Suddenly as a prayer
First so soft rain descended
Touching the window
I covet what Ill see
The drops so lovely dancing
On my window writing a message
waiting for you, we are raining,
come on, dance with us,girly
Tear falling down my cheeks
To the rain replied
I am gripped in vice of diseas
So gladly I would go out
Last week we played
You wrote millions messages
On my body, soaked my dress
And from the hight smiled at me
Now, I am feeling so much better
Youre raining, I feel you on me
Your warm drops
Writing on the window get well soon, girly
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-01-03 06:08:52]
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Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me
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by maryetta on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 07:48:06 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed your poem, i almost felt i was next to you beconning to the rain drops.
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Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me
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by norm on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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What a soft, touching poem
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I loved your poem, it's soft as silk
And poignant as is mother's milk,
The slightest touch of whimsy there,
For us to read and be aware... |
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Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:00:42 AM AEST
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Aika,
This poem is so like you in everyway. No matter the time of day, or how you are feeling, you try always to see the light and enjoy the beauty that surrounds you!
Tiny droplets of rain, writing messages....Oh how inspiring....and such wonder in your mind and pen!
Lovely dear friend, just lovely!
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Re: Déšť mi psal - The rain wrote message to me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 08:37:38 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this, Aika... even just reading your language was interesting...
My husband and I once had a Czech friend and I just loved listening to him talk...
Thanks for your comment on my last poem..
Jenni
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