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night life
Contributed by
stitches
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Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 08:18:01 AM in AEST
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seemingly dark forever in the back of a buliding in shambles inhaling the silent poison that no longer calms my nerves the incandescent flood light hums me to insanity the moth slapping at my too pale face tickles yet i want to scream
"stephanie," i cringe, "stephanie, it's time to go in" the scream is put on hold again
door sirens wail "close it already" as i try to roll unoiled barrels down an all tile hall somewhere in the lobby a woman is screaming barely audible through her husk of a mouth "MY BABY!" and then she chokes on her sobs
it's 4 a.m. and all the lights are on fast forward into motion as we pull them out of bed i never thought to make a bed could drive you to crying but each bed holds a name for only so long
another scream this time for momma and from the other direction a soft sickening thud as someone hits the floor running everyones running didn't know we could all run so fast blood, everywhere there's blood weak pulse, but he's not breathing "get the cart, now!" more footsteps is it me?
as i clock out i'm crying this wasn't my relative but then, his relatives didn't know how to fix his bed, just so his relatives didn't know he liked a new joke first thing in the morning his relatives didn't hold his hand when he had pnemonia no i wasn't his relative but i was his family
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Re: night life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cancer on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 09:24:08 AM AEST (User
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damn. sadly, that's the best i can come up with. one of my favorites of yours. i know it takes it's toll on you, but you make a difference in each of their lives.
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Re: night life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 12:59:48 PM AEST (User
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I dunno what to make of it. I loved it and I want to guess at your job. I really want to say that you work at a hospital... Dunno you could have some weird job that I've never heard of before though. This was a very cool write. I say 'Woe' was your best though. |
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Re: night life
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:53:46 PM AEST (User
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I think u work at a hospital if I remember correctly. I didn't know a job could take such a toll. I don't think I could work there, but ne way a good poem you brought me into it.
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