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Incomplete Without You.
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
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Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:26:46 AM in AEST
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InternetLove
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Incomplete without you,
The voids just filled with tears.
Deprived of most emotion
Overcome with fears.
To be forever with you,
Held tight in your arms,
Would fill me up completely,
I wouldnt feel alarm.
Oh dry up all these tears,
Where loves supposed to be,
Come and break the chains,
Come and set me free.
Copyright ©
Jessica_Saini
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2004-01-04 00:26:46]
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Re: Incomplete Without You.
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by garyh on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 02:16:42 AM AEST
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very nice :D
sweet and sensitive... i like it (and thats saying something, i don't like rhymes that often) ;) |
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Re: Incomplete Without You.
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 04:43:18 AM AEST
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Very beautifull!
Peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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