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HEY WORLD!
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:19:59 AM in AEST
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oops
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I'm just a boy
in this ***** up world...
I keep on moving, but I still do not understand.
If life is a movie..
I'm missing the best parts,
I'd press rewind but my lover is keeping me balanced
really really really really balanced!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't believe,
I don't believe in me anymore.
Do not ignore me people,
hey world!
Hey world this is me
and if you defy me
I will not be around anymore
Copyright ©
broken-glass
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2004-01-04 08:19:59]
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Re: HEY WORLD!
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:48:51 AM AEST
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Try reading the very first poem I ever submitted
"Praying can't change the rules"
I often feel exactly like you, have done for 70 odd years. It don't make any differeence but well said anyway!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bob |
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Re: HEY WORLD!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:22:26 PM AEST
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| believe in u, cos i certainly do!!! u are one of the most amazing people iv ever met. n yeh i feel the most balanced and at peace i think iv ever been. thanks to u. xx iloveyou xx |
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Re: HEY WORLD!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:38:56 PM AEST
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Gr8 poem! I wish I was in balanced - at least mentally!
Keep em comin'!
x*N*x |
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