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Watching
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:36:07 PM in AEST
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Cuddled in my corner
Huddled by my knees
Watching this last mourner
Standing deep within the trees
A gravestone built on lies
Your words linger here so plain
Watching this mother as she cries
Every attempt of comfort left in vain
Encircled within a room of distrust
Standing with a face so drained
Watching like unsettled dust
Smiling like its never rained
Forcing tears from a face of stone
Your words of shattered dreams
You left me hurt and so alone
Only comfort silent moonbeams
So standing deep within the trees
Watching my last mourner
Im huddled close by my knees
And sit here cuddled in my corner
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Re: Watching
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:53:29 PM AEST
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your talent shines through very well done
Shari |
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Re: Watching
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:20:41 PM AEST
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| Very moving. Great write! :) |
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Re: Watching
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by secretwind on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:56:45 AM AEST
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| I LIKE THIS...SILENT MOONBEAMS,NICE TOUCH.... |
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Re: Watching
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:29:40 AM AEST
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I really liked this one.
"A gravestone built on lies" ....timeless! A ton of talent in this write.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Watching
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:53:51 PM AEST
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| i really enjoyed this poem..and you have great talent...keep it up.... |
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