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Unanswered Questions
Contributed by
MissTea
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:10:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My hands are painted with blood, My heart wishes to be plastered by stone. Why do I hurt so many? Why do I hide my face?
Can I leave it all and say goodbye. Will it be easier to stay and die?
I hold this pill clutched in my hand, I want out I want to say goodbye to that man! What will they say when my lips have turned blue? Will they miss me? hate me? love me?
I'll never know.
They'll never know how much I loved them. I'll never let them, I'll never let them in!! Never will I hurt again. I entered in alone now I'll leave them all, in the dark, by myself, alone! Never will I hurt again!
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MissTea
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2004-01-05 03:10:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unanswered Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:00:38 AM AEST (User
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Powerful and beautiful. Questions left unanswered will forever haunt our minds. Peace be with you! Awesome poem! |
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Re: Unanswered Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by alecfernadez on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:16:59 AM AEST (User
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aww, please dont hurt yourself :(
Great poem |
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Re: Unanswered Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:07:29 PM AEST (User
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So sad, filled with hurt and lonliness. It really called out to me. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Unanswered Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:14:52 PM AEST (User
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this is a very emotinally sad write.. you can definately feel the lonliness and pain.. it's horrible when your in a relationship or marriage and someone makes you totally miserable.. awesome write though
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Re: Unanswered Questions
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 05:07:49 PM AEST (User
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wow I felt this one. The first two lines really set the standard for this poem. Wow keep it up.
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