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Disassociate Love
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 08:04:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I see you; The next minute I dont
I want to kiss you; But I wont
I want to touch you; But I can't
I want to caress you; But i'm an eggplant
I want to be with you; But I cant move
I want to dance with you; But I cant groove
I want to touch your naked skin,
I want to feel your silk breasts,
I want to love you with my heart,
But the saddest thing Is I cant
I cant move, I cant even speak
I'm frozen, and unable to see
The only thing I can do Is hold the knife,
Please let me love her, CHRIST!
Please let me love someone,
I CANT MOVE
I CANT MOVE
I can only cry, as I carve into my flesh,
I cant speak, I cant move, I'm making a mess
I got to move, I got to get up I MUST
But its too late as she watches with disgust
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-01-05 08:04:16]
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Re: Disassociate Love
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by MissTea on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:59:10 PM AEST
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WOW!! all your poems always seem to reach beneth my hard skin and really grasp my cold heart. amazing! Emotional! WOW!
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Re: Disassociate Love
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:11:35 PM AEST
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You have so much pain and depth in your writing. It touches me.
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Re: Disassociate Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:08:47 PM AEST
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this is a very touching poem.. you can definately feel the pain.. awesome write
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