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Can you remember me?
Contributed by
Kirby
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:01:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Do you remember my smile?
Can you pick me out of a line up?
Does my laughter ring in your head?
Or does my apperance seem blurred?
I bet you remember our long talk.
The one where I asked you why haven't you called.
The one where you lied to me and said that you tried.
Thelast time I saw you I was 17.
Alot has changed since then.
But you'll never know.
You can't imagine the pain you delt me.
The talks to a psychiatrist.
Why I bawl alone at night.
How hard it is to feel like a muttdog.
You were supposed to call and write.
I had to hear it from your ex that you guys were over.
I hate you for ruining my life.
I won't even be at your funeral.
That's because to me,you already are dead.
You did this to yourself.
Rott in hell becasue that is where you putmy heart and that is the closest that you will ever get to it!
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Kirby
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Re: Can you remember me?
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by irshprnss on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:38:43 PM AEST
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Really Deep! I understand..... And you are a stronger person for looking this in the face and writting about it. Great Write
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Re: Can you remember me?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:02:13 PM AEST
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you can definately feel the hurt and anger together in this poem.. its horrible when your real dad isn't there.. i know a few others who their dad left their life.. sorry you had to go through that .. this is a beatiful write on being hurt and angered by your dad..
peace joy and hope
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Re: Can you remember me?
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 03:58:47 PM AEST
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| Hmmm... I understand and you wrote it well. I wanted mine to die for the longest time. Very good write. You know I'm still here if you want to talk. |
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Re: Can you remember me?
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:38:32 AM AEST
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| not many can bring a tear to my eye......you know the silent ones that fall... without you realizing that you've lived every single word you've just read......."but you'll never know" .......awesome....... |
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