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An angel amongst us
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:18:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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An angel with her broken wings
Stuck amongst all you God fiends
Opens her mouth but doesnt sing
She opens her mouth and starts to scream
Am I in hell
**** whats that smell
Its to dark to even tell
To loud I have to yell
Where exactly is this place
Somewhere in outerspace
Oh my God whats wrong with his face
My God He would be disgraced
Now the angel will realize
Shes below her own skies
So this is what her God demized
Now the angel starts her cries
With broken wings she never flies
Lost all hope she never tries
Now she waits untill she dies
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Re: An angel amongst us
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:54:08 PM AEST
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Well written but even an angel with broken wings can still soar on faith...it all is how you look at it
Shari |
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Re: An angel amongst us
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:22:39 PM AEST
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Well spoken--- The words come with such a harsh tone at the end, that it commands attention from the reader.... Great write =)
God bless,
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Re: An angel amongst us
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by SuicidalSon on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:55:30 PM AEST
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| The angel with the broken wings has lost all faith in her lord That is why she cries and that is why she waits to die. Because she saw first handed what her god did to this place. She would rather die than to go back to heaven and be his servant. |
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Re: An angel amongst us
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:38:29 AM AEST
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Sad but a message to look at in both ways!
A very clever thought & write! Christina |
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