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Contributed by
me
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Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:54:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You
LOVE iS A WHORE
AND iM ALL ALONE
LiFE iS A *****
AND YOURE ALONE TOO
LOOK UP AT THE SKY
TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE
iF YOU SEE NOTHiNG BUT DARKNESS
YOURE JUST LiKE ME
i SEE YOUR LONELiNESS
i FEEL YOUR HUNGER
THE HUNGER iNSiDE OF YOU
AND THE BURNiNG ANGER
YOURE FULL OF POTENTiAL
USELESS iNDEED
YOU NEED NO ONE
YET YOU ARE iN NEED
YOU REACH OUT TO GRAB
SOMETHiNG NOT THERE
AND WHEN YOU FALL BACK
YOU DROWN IN DESPAiR
WHY ARE YOU ALL ALONE?
DiD LiFE FORGET YOU?
DiD LOVE LEAVE YOU BEHiND?
YOURE iN OBLiViON
YOU SEEM NOT TO CARE
YET i KNOW THAT iNSiDE
YOURE GASPiNG FOR AiR
iTS HARD TO FORGET YOU
CANT FORGET MY OWN FACE
iNSCRiBED WiTH A PAiN
i COULD NEVER ERASE
iF LiFE FORGOT ME
AND iF LOVE DOESNT CARE
THEN TEACH ME TO CRY
AND TEACH ME A PRAYER
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me
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2004-01-05 21:54:47]
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Re: you
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:01:07 PM AEST
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good work!
Shows wisdom for such a young age.
Very good.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: you
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:13:46 AM AEST
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wow I dunno how old you were when you wrote that, but it reads well, rhymes well, and shows an aparent better realization of the world than most thirty year olds!
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Re: you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 12:07:29 PM AEST
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| grade 7 or 8...12 or 13?? whoa... this rocks.. awesome |
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