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Pure Evil
Contributed by
monkey
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:18:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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he struggled to breathe
because you wished him dead
but you failed, thank god
you're pure evil
he wanted nothing from you
but you wouldnt leave him alone
thanks to you
hes scarred, forever,
with the memory
you have no idea
how many peoples lives would be torn
if he would have died
you never took the time
to really get to know him
but its too late now
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-01-05 23:18:53]
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Re: Pure Evil
(User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:08:19 AM AEST
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| wow, so angry and dark, great write |
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Re: Pure Evil
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:58:03 AM AEST
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| I liked this one. It was interesting. I'm sure the story is even more so. |
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