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A New Season
Contributed by
jme
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:49:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a snake shedding her skin
I must remove mine too
Expose this new person I've become
Letting go of my past
Approaching this fork in my path of life
I've chosen a new way
It leads me further from you,
But allows me to grow
Just as leaves in the fall
Everything in life must change
Even those we want to remain the same
It pains me now, but I must be free
I must move on
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jme
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2004-01-06 13:49:33]
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Re: A New Season
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:56:08 PM AEST
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| OH loved it! Its touching and full of beautiful imagery. Leaves the reader feeling a bit sad for you but it also gives hope that your decision was for a good cause. Amazing! |
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Re: A New Season
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by formerly_known on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:08:49 PM AEST
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| it was Lovely it kynda made me wanna cry had me thinking of my ex but i loved it |
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Re: A New Season
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:33:20 PM AEST
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| Great imagery and message. Bravo girl! *Claps hands wildly* Hee Ahhhhhhhhh |
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Re: A New Season
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by Remi on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:56:16 AM AEST
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| I like how the way u express your way of moving on, great write |
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