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Who’s that dreamer?
Contributed by
Necromant
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:42:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Whos that dreamer?
Rapt away in his thoughts,
Trying to search for a healer,
Thinking about the things he had fought for.
Trying to find a reason for everything,
Running from reality,
Finding shelter in his own thoughts
Returning back, loosing his serenity
Away from any trace of sanity.
Now, whos that dreamer,
That dreamt on possible things
But yet impossible to get,
Without getting fed of the world,
And all things that are mend to hurt?
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Necromant
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2004-01-06 14:42:58]
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by lonesomerose on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:58:06 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 03:23:31 PM AEST
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I think its a good start and your poem was easy to follow. I liked it
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by jme on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 03:26:11 PM AEST
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| I am impressed. Very well done. |
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:25:41 PM AEST
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| Very good poem. Interesting flow. I liked it. Had an odd tone in it. |
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:45:43 PM AEST
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Short and Sweet. makes one think
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by Empty_Soul on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:11:51 PM AEST
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It certainly does make one think as said above. Really great poem again anne, i'll through all of them eventually! lol
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Re: Who’s that dreamer?
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:53:03 PM AEST
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Heh? what? Who's calling me! ^_^ 'Trying to find a reason for everything,
Running from reality,
Finding shelter in his own thoughts'
Hehe, that is definately me! Great stuff, Anne, it hit right in the bull eye! Well, I am off to my dream again....^_^
~Whisper~
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