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You are the world
Contributed by
Kirby
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Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:17:20 PM in AEST
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Throughout my life,
No one had loved me like you.
With a gentle heart,
And a strong hand.
You have given me strength.
You have given me virtue.
In all the colors of the rainbow,
None compare to the light of your smile.
With your laughter,
You steal the rooms attention.
Your words,
Speak wisdom and truth.
When you smile,
A rose bloom opens.
When you cry,
So do the ones who love you.
To say you mean the world to me,
Would be an understatement
Because you mean the world to everyone who loves you.
You light my way through life,
With the love and energy you give off.
Forever my path will be clear,
Because youll always be here in my heart.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2004-01-06 22:17:20]
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Re: You are the world
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:21:56 PM AEST
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| I can see you share the same love for your grandfather as he does for you. Very nice and inspiring.. Keep up the great work.
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Re: You are the world
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by Solmyr1404 on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:31:03 PM AEST
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| wow, this poem has that sense that it is happening to me too, and I got teary-eyed reading it |
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Re: You are the world
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:22:13 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem and how blest you are to have someone in your life like that...I know you will always carry him in your heart and you will shine on in the world for him as his legacy
Shari |
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Re: You are the world
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:02:55 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull work of art in remembrence of your grandfather.
His beauty shines thru u.
luv, hugs,
emy |
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Re: You are the world
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 10:52:51 AM AEST
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| I'm sure he'll be forever proud of you too hon. Very good write. Yall have to stop with these kinds of poems I don't like thinking about my dead loved ones. Kinda painful... I still liked this alot. |
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