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self-pity in the shower
Contributed by
me
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:18:20 AM in AEST
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I feel sorry for myself
and shed a tear.
It rolls off my body
and joins the stream of water in the bathtub
rushing to hide into the dark drain.
I compose myself.
A ridiculous endeavor,
I am naked
as a newborn
alone in the foggy shower.
What might be the point of composure?
What might be the point of pretense?
I feel sorry for myself,
Ive shed a tear.
Why dont I shed another
and even many more?
Why dont I face
my self-centeredness?
Admit to my complaints?
Why pretend to be
something Im not,
selfless and strong?
The truth hidden within
a shower of droplets
rushing down into the drain,
is that I felt sorry for myself
and shed a tear.
Dec 15/03
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me
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2004-01-07 01:18:20]
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Re: self-pity in the shower
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:11:40 PM AEST
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thats so sad
great write |
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Re: self-pity in the shower
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:13:13 PM AEST
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thats so sad
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