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Hurt Eternal
Contributed by
destiny
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Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:58:43 PM in AEST
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I hope your new love is as good as me
maybe we weren't ment to be
the say it's better to have loved and lost
but every love comes with a cost
I'm leaving you here with all your tears
maybe now I can find someone dear
I thought that someone was you
as surely as your tears flew
but you hurt me and the pain I returned to you
It's as if my tears you never knew
and now from you they flow
in this hurt eternal
Copyright ©
destiny
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2004-01-07 12:58:43]
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Re: Hurt Eternal
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by LouisaMontagu on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 01:02:52 PM AEST
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arrr sweety,, these are wise words of truth,
any1 who has ever lost a love wil agree,, but!!
time heals and the habit breaks...
Louisa x x |
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Re: Hurt Eternal
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:05:33 PM AEST
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this is a very good write.. I enjoyed reading it.. sometimes it feels good to get even with someone that hurt you.. sometimes we need that .. I can relate to this myself.. awesome job
peace and hope
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Re: Hurt Eternal
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:04:51 PM AEST
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i can feel the pain in this one
Alec Fernandez |
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Re: Hurt Eternal
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:32:35 PM AEST
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| Such a truth. Very good write. I liked this alot. |
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