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Horrid House (Part 2)
Contributed by
garyh
on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 11:26:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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You turn
A shadow appears
Running as quickly
As your tears
Weeping violently
You smell the air
Blood and urine
Is the atmosphere
You creep forward
And brush your hair
You notice something
That isnt fair
Hair has fallen
In your hand you stare
Wailing louder
In the dull air
Look ahead
And all you see
Groans occurring
Blood of sea
Run fast
Across the room
Somethings coming
Cannot see
Stumble do not
Or shall be killed
Run faster
Or horror slay
You see a mirror
On the wall
You see your name
On grave been lay
The horror came
And cannot stop
Your life is gone
In hell you stay
Copyright ©
garyh
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2004-01-07 23:26:53]
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Re: Horrid House (Part 2)
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by jme on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:24:49 PM AEST
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| It's like a mini movie. Great write. Your few words speak so loudly. |
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Re: Horrid House (Part 2)
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by RochelleLloyd on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:08:43 AM AEST
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Both parts work well without the other. And together even better. Very well written.
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Re: Horrid House (Part 2)
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:08:10 PM AEST
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| I'm impressed!!!!!!!! You've done an excellent job. *S* Cynthia |
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