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If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:32:53 AM in AEST
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the only story
I like about myself
is, of course,
the one I don't remember
but my mother says
that I said this
I want to believe her
* * * * *
once there was a little girl
she went to a little preschool
and laughed in her little world
at this little preschool
there were many, many people
all different types
though the preschool was small
there were even two teachers
with the same name!
"Christine"
one had pale skin-- "white"
and one had dark skin-- "black"
one day at school,
the little girl skinned her knee
she started to cry
but Christine comforted her
later, the little girl told her mother
who asked, "which Christine?"
as she knew there were two,
the white and the black,
and the little girl answered,
"the one with long hair."
* * * * *
really, is it so very wrong
to want to be this girl again?
Copyright ©
ShadowDaughter
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2004-01-08 00:32:53]
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:41:37 AM AEST
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| Wow This is good |
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by Calista on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:37:41 AM AEST
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no way is there something wrong with wanting to be that little girl again its a great story, you should be proud of yourself...write more!
...Calista |
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 02:41:19 AM AEST
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this is a very good write.. its wondeful to be a child cuz while you are a child you are pretty much worry free then you grow up and the world hits you i like this poem alot.. awesome write
peace
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 06:17:36 AM AEST
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There is no truer happiness than that of a child. To recapture it, if even for a short period, would be a wonderful gift. Awesomefultastic poem.
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:17:19 PM AEST
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| Good write and great ideal. Heh. Nicely done hon. |
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:59:12 AM AEST
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| absolutely stunning. this piece caught me off gaurd. wonderful feeling of surprise. I wish my mind was that pure again aswell.... A+++++ great just great!!!!!! |
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Re: If Only I Remembered When I Was Worth Knowing
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:29:01 PM AEST
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Nice.
Spazzo |
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