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Simple Ponderings
Contributed by
dudleysgirl
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Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 12:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Some things arent simple it seems.
Saying I love you, building dreams
Blowing kisses to mark your goodbyes
Finding comfort in each others eyes
Speaking your heart
Baring your soul
Acting the part
Reaching your goal
Sharing each minute, and knowing you can
Admitting the outcome is out of your hands
Taking firm hold of the elusive brass ring
Knowing that time is a relative thing
Letting go. . . without making a scene
Some things arent simple it seems.
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dudleysgirl
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2004-01-08 12:54:07]
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Re: Simple Ponderings
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by mercedes on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:01:56 PM AEST
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| No some things are not simple. Even this poem seems simple enough but holds deep meaning. |
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Re: Simple Ponderings
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 01:10:22 PM AEST
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Wow, I dunno if I got the meaning write, but if I did, its fantastic the way you showed it, yet so subtley. I think this is a write worthy of more praise, because of its emotion, the love you portray and the passion. Keep up the great work
Alec Fernandez
(My Campaign: Time to take a stand, and read and comment on more poetry, laziness is not an option) |
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