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No Escape
Contributed by
Solmyr1404
on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:33:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look forward,
But I am facing toward my past.
I stand here
Longing for peace,
Yet waiting for death.
Sleep will not come to me,
Except for in small doses.
I lie awake,
Staring at the ceiling.
I close my eyes,
She does not fade,
Nor does my love for her fade.
Even in the thickest fog,
Or murkiest water,
There is no escaping
My love for her.
I am merely a slave
To this life,
Yet, she is a beautiful princess,
Whom I am not worthy to love.
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Solmyr1404
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2004-01-08 15:33:34]
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Re: No Escape
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by bigtig6269 on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:43:13 PM AEST
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| Dude, you sound like you are in pain. I know what that love is like, just keep at it man. maybe one day. If not, you could always shave your head and become a monk :) |
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Re: No Escape
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:43:46 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I liked it. |
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Re: No Escape
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:00:15 AM AEST
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| I love the simplicity of the theme in contrast with the seriousness of the message... this is poetic ride on with it... I love this |
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