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You told me to go, But my heart still says no!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:20:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You told me it was time to go,
Told me I needed to leave,
Told me this is something I should know,
That I was not who you thought I would be.
With everything inside of me,
All you said was all I heard,
So many conversations filled with mystery,
So many spoken tones filled with empty words,
All of these dreams I built up from the ground,
You wonder why I cried, why I was so affected,
You took my dreams and brought them crashing down,
The pain fill’s my heart; you act as if it was unexpected.
Please don’t close you eyes,
This is your life,
Are you who you thought you would be?
Or are you still living this false fantasy?
I am burning with desire when you are near me,
I am burning with desire when I hear you speak,
My desire burns brighter with mysteries,
Of mysteries of your love I still seek.
I am standing on the edge of me,
Standing by our love that can no longer be,
I tried to slow this love down,
This silence in my heart still spins me around.
Your look is like a symphony,
Your heart beats like a well-strung cortet,
You are the one that opens the eyes of humanity,
Your love is one I will never forget.
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I refuse to give up on you now,
I awake alone, and want to blow into pieces,
I refuse to even back down,
Can you feel my love for you? How it never ceases?
Maybe I am a fool for loving you,
Maybe I should forget it all and move along,
I mean that is what I am expected to do,
But my heart tells me to stay; and the message is so strong.
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Honor
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MajesticPoet
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2004-01-09 00:20:02]
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Re: You told me to go, But my heart still says no!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:41:57 AM AEST
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| I love how you worded this one. I am going through something similar, and I can totally compare to what you said. I cant wait to see some more of your work |
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Re: You told me to go, But my heart still says no!
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 01:09:23 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comments. I hate having this feeling.. It is not that I dont want to have it, but I know it is a feeling that will never be filled again... Please click on my name and feel free to read my other works.. I hope you continue to enjoy them, and I will do my best to keep them coming.,
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Re: You told me to go, But my heart still says no!
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:25:43 PM AEST
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| I feel ya on this one man. Good write. I got 3 months though and have gotten over it. It was my choice that we don't talk. |
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