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every time
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:50:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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everytime i fall,
i get up and stand,
maybe it's just my strand,
to hold on to....
but i don't know why i do it!
everytime i break,
i find my self at least,
trying to smile,
but it don't even make me feel,
warmer inside!
so i don't know why i do it!
every time i breathe,
i think what it's like to die,
maybe i should have just done it,
when i was an innocent girl of nine!
sometimes i think...
SHOULD I DO IT?
that would be nice...
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Re: every time
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:53:27 AM AEST
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| read my poem suidal...Sometimes it takes another step and a look ahead to make sure that you dont step back and feel another dread....keep on keeping on...tie a knot and hang on....it will get better and the one who can really truely help you my friend is the one I wrote about in my poem......take care sandy |
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Re: every time
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:55:40 AM AEST
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Oh no don't do it! We want to read more of your poems! ;)
Anyway I mostly agree with your poem for myself. The 'I don't know why i do it' is really appropriate! Nice writing
Anne |
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Re: every time
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by TundraHydra on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:04:26 PM AEST
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| another great suicidal poem by another great poet. keep up the writing. |
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Re: every time
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by TundraHydra on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:04:52 PM AEST
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| another great suicidal poem by another great poet. keep up the writing. |
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Re: every time
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by MissTea on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:05:00 PM AEST
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Brilliant poem! its sounds alot like my days here on earth. I often get panic attacks before i have to go meet with some friends. the fear of having to put on that happy face again, the stress of it all just burdens me. i don't know when we'll ever be-able to walk around showing our true feelings, but until that day comes i will equally dread it and long for it.
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