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marriage contract
Contributed by
Merry
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the sweet soft texture of a kiss
before it turns to passion
such tender sentiment expressed
in hopeful taste of eternal bliss
arms to hold each other captive
the heated coals of lust ignited
there is that one chance to give
together we decide to live
the promise of a future bright
hinges on our innocence
the stars above us, sparkling light
in envy of our love tonight
with breath a whisper in my ear
our fate is sealed within a kiss
it's you i hold forever dear
in giving freely without fear
the years pass by the garden gate
and we are battered by the storm
our love sometimes feels like hate
but we are bound by lover's fate
to spend all of eternity
leg shackeled and forever wed
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-01-09 14:36:07]
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Re: marriage contract
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 02:55:34 PM AEST
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That was an incredibly beautiful love poem !!! I loved the way you ended it, in typical Merry fashion :o)
Ya get roses for this one.
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Re: marriage contract
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by Solmyr1404 on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 03:41:47 PM AEST
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| that is a beautiful poem. keep at it, i hope to read more of your stuff. |
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Re: marriage contract
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:48:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful, romantic, and so enjoyable to read.
Kie |
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Re: marriage contract
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:12:23 PM AEST
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That is lovely. makes me feel guilty, our 50th Anniverary is next month I'll have to try and write something special like this poem of yours, but how to get it on a single page?
bob |
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Re: marriage contract
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:14:53 PM AEST
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| I love your rhyme scheme in this poem and the different style from you as well ... as Larry said, I like the Merry ending too :)) ... Jan |
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Re: marriage contract
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:22:31 PM AEST
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| mmm sweet, nothing like it, love your sense of humour at the end too, heh, hugs n' love nessa |
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