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Look who's heartless now
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:13:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Cry with me, just cry
And understand what It feels like
To hear a tear drop
Emotions locked up
Anger, hatred kept inside
Have you ever felt this way before?
Excuses and lies
It penetrates the heart
Listen to me, why wont you just listen?
Take a look at the past
Its full of misery isnt it?
But you should know how that feels
Im fed up with lying for you
Im begging for mercy
I dont want to be your slave anymore
Is this really what I deserve?
These foul words you present me with
I clearly mean nothing to you anymore
But why waste these tears?
This time Im not coming back-take your lies
And save them for someone who cares
Words of hatred
Have been passed this night
Why does she treat me like this?
She says Im heartless
That I dont even care
Well look whos heartless now
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Re: Look who's heartless now
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by all_for_loving_you on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:55:19 PM AEST
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| Wow, I really like this. I just got into a fight with my best friend the other night. I can kind of relate. So much feeling, it's like I can understand how you feel. good job :) |
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Re: Look who's heartless now
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by lonesomerose on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:20:35 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Look who's heartless now
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by AbstractMinded on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:48:30 PM AEST
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| Nice and angry. I wonder who this is about... |
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Re: Look who's heartless now
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 10:00:07 AM AEST
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| wow, this is great! keep up the good work nat!!! luv phil xxx |
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Re: Look who's heartless now
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:47:20 PM AEST
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| Very good write. I enjoyed reading this. It fully conveyed your emotions. |
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