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Inflicted Not Addicted
Contributed by
pyrochick
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my eyes sting with tears
from the thought of you not being near
i can't imagine life with out you
i can't survive a second with you out of my life
some say im addicted
but i say im just inflicted
inflicted by your love
i go crazy
with you not holding me
i faint when you turn your cheek
i'm afriad you might dissappear when i blink
some say im addicted
but i say im just inflicted
inflicted by your love
i'm afraid to leave a room
in fear for when i return you might have moved
i watch every step you take
i know exsactly when you blink
when you speak when you breath
some say im addicted
but i say im just inflicted
inflicted by your love
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pyrochick
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2004-01-09 16:23:13]
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Re: Inflicted Not Addicted
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by all_for_loving_you on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 04:50:53 PM AEST
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| Wow, I REALLY like this. This is an amazing write. I can relate to the feelings in this poem. Good job :) |
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Re: Inflicted Not Addicted
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:09:15 PM AEST
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Awesome, I love it! And yes, I have felt that way, and I do feel that way. It's nice to see a love poem that's not grossly mushy or cliche. Nicely done!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Inflicted Not Addicted
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:03:46 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this write a helluva lot. Damn good. It was very good. |
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Re: Inflicted Not Addicted
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:51:47 PM AEST
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| This write was very interesting because where can u fraw the line between Love and infatuation or obsession! Either way I loved this poem! Good write! Love:::Kirby |
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