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I'll Miss The Feeling
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'll miss the feeling of your gentle touch
But once again you've put me through too much
I'll miss the feeling of you holding me close
Whispering sweet words and letting your love show
I'll miss the feeling of you making me laugh
But your false words have again cut me in half
I'll miss the feeling of your soft, dark skin
However, it's true that you're my darkest sin
I'll miss the feeling of you running your hands through my hair
But when I needed you most you never were there
I'll miss the feeling of hearing your voice
But you lied and deceived, that was your choice
I'll miss the feeling of spending hours on the phone
But the pain I've felt, you've never known
I'll miss the feeling of getting ready for a date
But these choices make life, and choices won't relate
I'll miss the feelings of all the things we would do
But never will I miss the abuse.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2004-01-09 17:02:36]
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Re: I'll Miss The Feeling
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by all_for_loving_you on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:10:00 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent write. So much emotions. |
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Re: I'll Miss The Feeling
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by Hope33 on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 05:26:31 PM AEST
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| this is a real deep poem, i really enjoyed it |
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Re: I'll Miss The Feeling
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:13:40 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this. It totally got under my skin. I'm feeling it, I really am. Awesome write, once again!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I'll Miss The Feeling
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 03:38:33 PM AEST
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| This was damn good. I like how you showed both sides of your feelings. Very good indeed. |
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Re: I'll Miss The Feeling
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:29:00 PM AEST
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| after read so many dark and angry poems of yours, this one is almost like heaven!^_^ But of course, still very sad...v_v the poem is really smooth and nice, I like it a lot..... |
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Re: I'll Miss The Feeling
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by CarrieLindeman on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 05:30:22 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write |
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