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behind my eyes
Contributed by
Blaq_rose
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 06:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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swirls of color
flashes of light
blossoming flowers
birds in flight
quiet nights
full of noise
clumsy moonlight
filled with poise
clouds that dance
sun that shines
a bright wild world
without a straight line
behind my eyes
i'm who i wish i was
in a word i want to happen
though it never does
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2004-01-09 18:27:47]
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Re: behind my eyes
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 06:39:14 PM AEST
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Very rhymic and easy going though I can't seem to find the meaning of the conclusion *feeling dumb* But I like the flow of it :)
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