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I am so tired
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:38:37 PM in AEST
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My world implodes silently
Peices falling on themselves
I watch, in slow motion
Writing bad poetry
I am so tired
My head pounds
My head hurts
I smile sadly
Seeing the road ahead
Afraid of where it might take me...
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Re: I am so tired
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by Necromant on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:43:05 PM AEST
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Short but very thoughtful and true eccept for one thing...i.e....This isn't bad poetry, this is a very good, thoughtful and true poem and the wording is just perfect, fits to the theme.
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Re: I am so tired
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by fallen_eyes on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 07:55:46 PM AEST
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| sausage babe, its not bad poetry seriously i could spend hours reading your work, its great just like u, pickle x |
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Re: I am so tired
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:08:31 PM AEST
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well written the road takes you where you envision it ... positive thoughts begat a positive road and visa versa
Shari |
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