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Confused
Contributed by
pyrochick
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:14:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i do not understand
what's going on between us
what has happened to our love
we used to have so much fun
we used to make each other laugh
you used to hold me tight
when i wasn't feeling right
we used to run down that old road
we used to laugh so hard we lost control
i do not understand
what's going on between us
why won't you come see me
why won't you come hold me
why can't you be here
to tell me we're going to be fine
i do not understand
what's going on between us
i just miss you so much
are we going to be fine?
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pyrochick
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2004-01-10 00:14:17]
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Re: Confused
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by Kie on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:36:16 AM AEST
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You expressed your worry & concern so well in your write. It's rough when those questions are being asked. I liked your poem alot.
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Re: Confused
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by monkey on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:55:23 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem because it reminded me of a time my friend and I went through where we didnt think we were ever going to be friends again. But, again, I really liked this poem. Keep writing :D
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Re: Confused
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:05:24 AM AEST
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Amazing style. First part so loving and tender, second very worried and uncertain. Just the type of feelings most of us expierance when in love. Nice piece
Anne |
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