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The Throne
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 01:06:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Steady your wings my friend
My circuits have gone nuts again
Kinda like Stalin meeting King
For the first time
Everything is madness
Nobody’s doing the right thing
Make eye contact
Before we’re in the middle
And we’re exposed to this wreck
Innocent lives for the taking
Wear you around my neck
Stick to this, I resent
Next to nothing, close to death
Copyright ©
tbsbikescene
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2004-01-10 01:06:13]
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Re: The Throne
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:57:32 AM AEST
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The wording is really good and also the flow. Only one small thing....what is the messege of this poem. It sounds like you're in the middle of a fight or something but it isn't very clear.. excuse my dumbness hehe
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