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Unsaid it remains
Contributed by
perfect-imperfections
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:11:50 AM in AEST
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little words which could never be said
of all the reasons that I never had
mystical illusions comprise the very thought
all the precious moments which you readily forgot
living between this dilemma of of heights and fall
unsaid it remains after saying it all!
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Re: Unsaid it remains
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:35:50 AM AEST
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Short and to the point, like it
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Re: Unsaid it remains
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:08:00 AM AEST
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Quote - "Precious moments which you readily forgot" - Yes readily expresses it all for me. Short write but good.
Emma.
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Re: Unsaid it remains
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:08:26 AM AEST
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Good write. I understand this pretty well I think. At least for me I do. Good job.
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