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YOU GOTTA USE YOU FIST, TO MAKE IT THROUGH THE MIST!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:29:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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now the day after i said i'd kill her,
the words are still fresh in my mind,
all this anger will not be forgetten!
it will NOT be left behind!
this battle's not over,
coz i know i'm to angry to walk away,
why should i let her get away with this?
this! is no longer a game!
at all times i try to keep it in,
i try to pretend she don't excist!
but she's brought it all on again,
and now i'm standing at the lake of mist!
the lake is more like a swomp,
i ain't about to say i won't cross,
coz i need to pass this obstickal coarse,
but the only way of passing,
is to break whatever's in my way,
and now with evil's she's standing there,
then in an instant,
her friends appear!
leaving me with nothing,
but in my way some mist,
AND THAT'S THE REASON,
WHY I HAVE TO USE MY FIST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-10 06:29:26]
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Re: YOU GOTTA USE YOU FIST, TO MAKE IT THROUGH THE MIST!
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:36:52 AM AEST
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Oh the ending is great!! Anger radiating from this poem is intoxicating! I liked it!
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Re: YOU GOTTA USE YOU FIST, TO MAKE IT THROUGH THE MIST!
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by jkpunk13 on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:23:41 AM AEST
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