|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Soldier Voják
Contributed by
Aika
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:10:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
SOLDIER
I was a soldier in a foreign country
I came to fight with enemies
I have never been scared
I had not known what was death
Right second day
We were passing the capital
Me and five other men
In our military vehicle
There were not many people in the streets
Scared they were hidden
The capital still was beautiful
Not yet by war destroyed
When suddenly above me
A weird sound I could hear
Then terrible blast
I covered my head with hands and dark
I do not know how long it took
I do not know, what occured
When I opened my eyes
In the dust swirling
My life has changed
Ruins, pieces of bodies
My friend saved me
His body covering me
The only I see, are angels
To heaven carrying dead souls
NO,I did not want this
So many dead ones I had never seen!!
I hear crying, running so fast
Someone survived, I am not only one alive
And I see man with child
So many sores, so much blood
Does not matter he was enemy
Does not matter I was solder
I am human, I wont let them die
I soothe the child, I mop his blood
How innocent, how small!
Why??? Why am I here so??
War is the punishment, for all of us
War does not solve,settlement is in us!
I lift them both up father and child
Taking them away, where ruins arent around
My heart beating loud, teared off with sorrow
No, I am not soldier, it is not I
This was my first war
And also the last
That time we walked to seclusion
Today I live in enemy area
Today all are my friends
I do not believe in segregace
Where people want to live, there is place
And nothing else matters
VOJK
Byl jsem vojkem v ciz zemi
Přiel jsem bojovat s nepřteli
Nikdy jsem se nebl,
Co je smrt tenkrt jsem neznal
Hned druh den
Projděli jsme městem
J a vojků pět jetě
Ve vojenskm autě
Nebylo tu moc lid v ulicch
Ze strachu zůstali schovan
To město doposud bylo krsn
Krsn, vlkou nedotčen
Kdy v ten moment nad hlavou
Divn zvuk jsem uslyel
Pak stran vbuch, zř
Rukama jsem si zakryl hlavu a tma
Nevm,jak dlouho to trvalo,
Nevm, co se celou dobu dělo
Kdy jsem otevřel oči,
V prachu vřcm,
můj ivot rzem se změnil
trosky, kusy lidskch těl,
mě zachrnil můj přtel
jeho tělo leelo na mm
podivn ticho, rozlz se strach
je tu někdo iv? Zblznm se snad
jedin, co vidm, jsou anděl
odnej due zemřel
Ne, tohle jsem j nechtěl!
Tolik mrtvch jetě jsem neviděl!
Slym nřek, utkm,
Někdo přeil, nejsem iv sm
A vidm, mue s dtětem
Jsou sam rna, krev
Kalu na to, e byl nepřtel,
Kalu na to, e jsem vojkem
Jsem člověk, nenechm je zemřt
Ukonejm dtě, z něj chci krev setřt
Jak nevinn, jak maličk!
Proč??? Proč j tu jsem?
Vlka je trest, pro vechny z ns
Vlka neře, smr je v ns
Zvedm je oba, otce i dtě
Odvdm je pryč, kde nejsou jen sutě
Srdce mi tepe, rve jej al
Ne, nejsem vojk, to nejsem j
Tohle byla moje prvn vlka
Byla i posledn
Tehd jsme se dostali do stran
Dnes iju na nepřtelskm zem
Dnes vichni okolo jsou m přtel
Nevěřm na rozdělen
Kde lid chtěj t, tam msto jest
Na ničem jinm nezle
Copyright ©
Aika
... [
2004-01-10 09:10:45]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Soldier Voják
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:32:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
The cruelty of war grrr. Very descriptive and sad. Great writing!
Anne |
|
|
Re: Soldier Voják
(User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 09:34:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very well done! u captured the meaninless behind war, and how sometimes, if willed, that there can be a rainbow after the storm.
Good read!
MissTea |
|
|
Re: Soldier Voják
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:04:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great vivid description of war, great write n keep up the good work!
Alec Fernandez
(p.s. sorry about before, I was in a depressive angry mood, and I didnt mean to be a dick head) |
|
|
Re: Soldier Voják
(User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 02:42:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ah, how true and moving, like most of yours I've read so far....brr, I could almost feel to be there.. you've good talent to make ppl feel pulled into your stories, pretty well done! :D |
|
|
Re: Soldier Voják
(User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:17:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You have captured the futility of war so well here Aika.Maybe the world leaders need to read this and think about what you have written.Then maybe, just maybe, this pointless destruction could be averted.
steve |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
