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trying, for a good life...
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 02:44:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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today i felt warmer,
though this life is so much harder,
then it should be!
my problems,
are not yet over,
my head is full of ****,
still, i'm gonna try,
i did a kind thing for my mum today,
and she said thankyou back,
and now i don't feel perfect,
but it's better than being smacked!
so with this world i'm gonna try,
well, with this life, i mean,
and since writing makes me slightly better,
i'll continue letting off steam...in this way,
and all other that read this,
i hope one day,
you'll be healed and ok!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-01-10 14:44:23]
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Re: trying, for a good life...
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 03:55:59 PM AEST
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That's a very positive poem. Best wishes, Nice one
Anne |
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Re: trying, for a good life...
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by Chanti on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:04:23 PM AEST
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| Great inspirational write! Im glad to see someone thinking positive! :D |
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