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Rànë
Contributed by
fionndruinne
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 03:15:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Loneliness like a sea
Surrounds my soul
When the light fades
My way wanes
Darkness drifts
Like a cloud coming
Across the ocean
When I walk alone
My heart cries
In sad silence
Footsteps fall
As I wander wide
My heart longs
For light lifting
Warmth kindling
Joy brightening
In the distance
Stars shine
But thrice-distant
How can I reach them?
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fionndruinne
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2004-01-10 15:15:41]
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Re: Rànë
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:26:58 AM AEST
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I sure feel it. Good write.
Emma. |
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Re: Rànë
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:00:53 PM AEST
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Ah.. pure alliteration... impressive.
See you in about an hour.
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Re: Rànë
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:26:45 PM AEST
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| This poem speaks to my heart. I can empathize with that sentiment. Since dad's death, I have been very lonely and can feel so desolate- but the Lord is my Comforter. Beautifully written, as always. The Lord has given you a wonderful gift as a wordsmith. |
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Re: Rànë
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:03:20 PM AEST
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Their is a contentment in the loneliness expressed here. I once wrote something about there being a comfort in a loneliness that has become a friend. I like this. So different from your other writes. I like the honesty of it.
Stitch |
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Re: Rànë
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:40:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful and longing for what is just out of reach...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Rànë
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 02:30:35 AM AEST
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In the distance
Stars shine
But thrice-distant
How can I reach them?
i loved this! especially this ending excellent work.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Rànë
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:39:43 PM AEST
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Oh, I've so been there. Hope you're not lonely too often. But the poem is terrific.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Rànë
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by frejya on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:24:25 AM AEST
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i can relate 2 this one
nice work
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Re: Rànë
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:37:38 PM AEST
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| Andrew; this was such a well thought out poem. As a reader, your emotions really jumped out at me. I really enjoyed this! You have a way with words that's almost enchanting.... Scorp. |
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