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Pure Anger
Contributed by
Empty_Soul
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:36:45 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I sit here talking to a friend
wondering will this torment never end
and why should such thoughts be bothering me?
my anger struggles to escape
and my pupils start to dialate
the hatred starts to burn and bubble
for all this worlds stupid troubles
i hate myself but i hate you more
this my friend is my final flaw
the end has finally come
and i am now my angers deed is done
the world is in pieces and my anger has achieved its final score
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Re: Pure Anger
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:46:39 PM AEST
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Finally another poem from you! Such anger! Grrr (lol) NIce one! And good wording as well ;)
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Re: Pure Anger
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by Aika on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 06:49:06 PM AEST
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LOvely, but sad
I would like to tell
send your anger to hell..
I do the same when feel angry
anyway I would be so crazy..
A lot of love, aika:-) |
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Re: Pure Anger
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by forever_lonely on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:35:37 PM AEST
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dude this is brilliant really sums up how much i think we both feel sometimes brilliant dude
kept in true style and with true emotion
all the best dude luke |
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Re: Pure Anger
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 08:38:11 PM AEST
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nice release on true emotions well done.
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Re: Pure Anger
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by monkey on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:06:22 PM AEST
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Wow. Thats kind of like the poem I wrote "hatred" but, its a lil' less hateful (yours is i mean) I really like this one.
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