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Bloated Human Fish Chow
Contributed by
ceruleanafterglo
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:01:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Cast me into your deepest sapphire waters
With the best of intent
The tyrants of this sea sense my fear
My skin
I fail in seeing them
In this wet blackness
One cut and I start to bleed
The orcas and parasites come to feed
Shrieks of pain are drowned in blood
All the while you never saw me
You never knew me
Under perfect pastel palette of sky
Under full moon I become nature's indulgence
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ceruleanafterglo
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2004-01-10 19:01:48]
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Re: Bloated Human Fish Chow
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 07:24:08 PM AEST
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Oh my *** Wow really strong words! You must have passed through a lot.....great writing very expressive
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Re: Bloated Human Fish Chow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 08:32:58 PM AEST
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you said alot in a short masterpiece amazing!
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Re: Bloated Human Fish Chow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:51:42 PM AEST
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Welcome to your-poetry.com....the best poetry site on the net.... The imagery in this is awesome...great job..
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Re: Bloated Human Fish Chow
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:21:07 AM AEST
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| Interesting write... I liked it. |
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