|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
WORTH!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:47:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
She is like a fragile bird
Whose wings are badly bent.
Thats caught within the thickets,
Her strength is almost spent.
She is like a petal,
Still clinging to the rose.
Who sways in all directions,
That each wind happens to blow.
She is like a tinkling glass,
Half full and yet half gone.
Who wants to live forever,
Yet wishes life be done.
She does not see her value.
Yet this treasured prize is mine.
Her worth above all measure,
Today and for all time.
robertburns2@mac.com
Copyright ©
robert_edgar_burns
... [
2004-01-10 22:47:31]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: WORTH!
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:57:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautifull!
peace,
emy |
|
|
Re: WORTH!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:36:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Absolutely beautiful, Rob...
Jenni |
|
|
Re: WORTH!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 07:57:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very very very .... Beautiful and touching! Vivid imagery, very well chosen. This is very amazing!! Very talented!! Keep it up!!!
Anne |
|
|
Re: WORTH!
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:12:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Robert, your words are so soothing, and so beautifully stunning, great gem here, full of lots of emotions, take care Val |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
