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You're Dead
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 10:53:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I'm trying to get you out of my head
Trying to forget every word you ever said
trying to forget everything we did
trying to forget you're dead
we used to have so much fun
but now we are done
we got into so many fights
we were always very tight
we used to laugh until we cried
we used to do things together till you died
i'm trying to work through it
but its very hard
i can't imagine life without you
i can't believe you died
i can't believe you were here
and now you're gone
i'm dying inside just from the thought
i know people die
i know it's part of life
but why you
why now
it just isn't right
Copyright ©
pyrochick
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2004-01-10 22:53:10]
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Re: You're Dead
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
peace, joy, luv, huggs, angels,
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Re: You're Dead
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:30:01 AM AEST
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Lifes questions. Tragic. No matter how we lose one, how we will never see that one again. Painful. Nice write. Sad to try and forget them though. All the best.
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Re: You're Dead
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 07:59:28 AM AEST
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So sad! This poem truely comes from the heart! Its very touching! Very well written!
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