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How Much For Your Love
Contributed by
EmSal
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:22:12 AM in AEST
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All those times I cried for you,
I know, I know I wasted my time.
And all those times I thought I knew,
But I was never, no never on your mind.
All those years of silence I went through,
How the violence scarred my mind,
But there was still a feeling left to find,
It was the power, the love and the hurt for you.
All those times you would turn your face from me,
It made me, it made me so confused.
My love was too strong for me to be free,
But my heart was falling apart, bloodied, abused.
Numb, I became numb, and I laughed at my face,
As I scratched my nails down its skin,
Making the outside too look like a disgrace.
I laughed and laughed at myself for him.
Leaving just a note, a note for you to read,
As the last of my saviours has left too, dear,
If you just know, know that youre my hearts need,
Could, oh could you spare me at least one tear?
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2004-01-11 01:22:12]
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Re: How Much For Your Love
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by Solmyr1404 on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:41:15 AM AEST
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whoa...i'm in shock. that was powerful.
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Re: How Much For Your Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:11:16 AM AEST
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Oh, wow Em, that was amazing. I love how you repeated words, like Could, oh could you... etc. It really empathizes your pain. Of course, I can relate to this poem completly. I really love this poem. Stay strong Emma, and if you need to talk, then let me know k?
-hugs- Stacey |
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Re: How Much For Your Love
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:50:46 AM AEST
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Gosh! I'm stunned!!!!! WOW!!!!!!! Very deep and touching and strong!!!!!!! Its perfect!! I'm very sorry for you. Grrr who was the one that made you like this?!! Beautiful one!!
Anne |
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Re: How Much For Your Love
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:05:43 PM AEST
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| Emmy I think this was one of the better poems I have ready in a while. It was very powerful and I love how you wrote it. Excellent write. |
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