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Nobody Sees
Contributed by
eternal_sorrows
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:55:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears hidden deep tucked in the soul
hush little girl, no one must know.
Silence is echoed or so it seems
holding in tight vibrations of screams.
Longing for memories of yesteryears
soul quietly weeping, alone lost with fears.
Destinys path day to day
life is worth living or so they say.
The brief smile they saw was only to please
I'm dying inside and nobody sees.
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eternal_sorrows
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2004-01-11 08:55:17]
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Re: Nobody Sees
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 09:06:09 AM AEST
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Short and very touching! The wording is really deep. I sympatise with this poem that's why I like it a lot! Keep on writing never give up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Nobody Sees
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by CuttersAngel on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 11:10:41 AM AEST
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| Ilove this!! Great job!!!!! |
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Re: Nobody Sees
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 12:36:53 PM AEST
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this is really good, keep up the great work
Alec Fernandez
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Re: Nobody Sees
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:51:48 PM AEST
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This poem spoke to me in volumes. You captured the feeling extremely well. I really like this one.
Truly,
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Re: Nobody Sees
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:26:30 AM AEST
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Reminds me of someone I know... the emotions run deep in this one... though it's short... it's to the point! Love it... keep writing... u can only get better and better...
~Donna~ |
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