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My Distress
Contributed by
Empty_Soul
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Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:13:01 AM in AEST
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Wrote this at work 2day in a about 15 mins, dont think its very good at all but everyone who reads it PLEASE comment as a lot of you are not. Thank you.
My hatred for one man can never be expressed enough, no thoughts or words can ever diminish him enough.
The man I talk of has a fear in his pressence but is not so different in my eyes.
THe trouble I have is he is often quite near, you see my problem is one of sorrow for this man is me.
short an ******, never mind. =)
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Re: My Distress
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 10:20:10 AM AEST
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What an unexpected end!! Don't hate yourself! (at least hate those who deserve your hatred) Ups shouldn't encourage evil.....Ah well its too late ha! :p Keep on writing and post more! ;)
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Re: My Distress
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by forever_lonely on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 07:29:23 PM AEST
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John
Nice poe-eeemmm
you *****-en-wrottneted a gee-rate poe-em
keep up the great writes
luke |
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Re: My Distress
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by a_bear on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:56:10 AM AEST
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| I love this poem because I have writtten one almost like it. Mine is about looking at the beast within...an image in a mirror..seeing myself as I really am and hating it. But being unable to turn away...I'll have to post it someday. As usual, I would change a lot of things, but won't bother to say what unless you ask..because they aren't important..just different style stuff...and you aren't me. I am curious as to the word that got blocked out? e-mail me...LOL |
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