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A Woman's Fantasy!
Contributed by
Maha
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Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:46:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A very special person she is looking for;
A person who scarcely existed before.
This is her great long-sought goal,
To find the missing part of her soul.
She is seeking a creature who is fair,
Honest, loyal, and handles her with care.
Compassionate and patient when her heart bleeds of sorrow,
Strong and reliable when she is weak and afraid as a sparrow.
She is seeking someone whom she can believe,
Someone who will not give up and leave,
After their first stormy childish fight,
Someone who will search with her for light.
She is seeking someone dignified and proud,
Yet his nobleness melts modestly in the crowd,
Someone whose wisdom overwhelms her mind,
But in matters of the heart, he is giving and kind.
She is not looking for luxury, charm, or perfection.
She is looking for one who can give her true affection.
Someone whos trustworthy and virtuous,
Someone whos devoted and gracious.
An angel this person is not,
His defects are, in fact, a lot,
But she can handle his imperfections,
As long as love dominates his affections.
Sadly, her search will end in despair,
And she will be bitterly obliged to declare,
That after searching everywhere, she had a shock,
Because she discovered that a true man is out of stock!
Copyright ©
Maha
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2002-09-01 07:46:02]
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Re: A Woman's Fantasy!
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by MisterRight on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 12:30:07 PM AEST
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It's amazing how you described me so well without ever meeting me, I'm impressed. There's still at least one left in stock hun, that would be me, but you should know that by the name, "MisterRight".
Great write!
We may be rare, but we do exist!
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Re: A Woman's Fantasy!
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 03:27:06 PM AEST
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lol @ curtis's comment...all kidding aside tho he is right there are real men out there just hard to find...great write..
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Re: A Woman's Fantasy!
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by Maha on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 03:39:33 AM AEST
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I know that some real good men do exist, but I see that they never meet the real good women. Right? Besides, in our fantasies, we always dream of the best.
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Re: A Woman's Fantasy!
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by Maha on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 03:46:36 AM AEST
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I know that real men exist. My husband is one of them. He has fulfilled a great part of my dream, but still I wish that he'd be better. In love, we always ask for more...right?
Thank you for your encouraging comment. |
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