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All I Have Done
Contributed by
jeanie
on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 02:40:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I've cut my head
coz I hoped I'd stop to worry
I've cut my neck
coz I thought I'd stop to cry
I negotiated my feelings
And I hoped it'd stop chasing me
I asked the nightmares
To give me one night free
Free of your presence
I killed my love for you
I asked my heart to stop beating
I want no vengeance
Coz it's not the best tool
I learnt to live without you
I thought nothing worse could happen
I survived all the cruel
Truths I had to go through
I stayed in my corner
After a period of time
Days started be sunny again
Till you came back and
And you said you loved me
That was the day I died
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-01-11 14:40:44]
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Re: All I Have Done
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 05:32:50 PM AEST
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I really liked these lines
'I've cut my head
coz I hoped I'd stop to worry
I've cut my neck
coz I thought I'd stop to cry
I negotiated my feelings'
These ones too
'I killed my love for you
I asked my heart to stop beating
I want no vengeance'
They were deeply awesome. |
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