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THE FEELING I HOLD WITHIN.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:57:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the feelings i hold within,
are trapped deeply inside my skin,
i'm cold,
from the feeling i hold,
and i'm numb,
coz i feel that i'm too dumb.
i'm lost,
in the ice,
my life's a worthless,
sacrifice,
my minds an endless,
passage,
my soul,
carries a,
package,
i don't know what is in it,
as there's nothing left in me.
the nightmares i hold are dangerous,
the tears i cry leave me dieing,
slowly i am dieing,
unlike a silent, silk, black,
atmosphere,
or a screeming, endless echo...
if i'm not ill,
what am i?
my minds so full,
of crazy thoughts,
what i see,
is what i believe,
none will change,
my life,
or me!
i'm rhyming like i'm perfect,
THE PERFECT HUMAN BEING!
this world will soon fall apart,
and i,
guess i'll just be here,
dieing in,
insanity,
that's rison,
from the DARK!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-01-11 15:57:09]
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Re: THE FEELING I HOLD WITHIN.
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 04:10:13 PM AEST
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| I love poems that I can understand and not sit there and wonder what the poet is saying.great work....So glad that GOD loves you and is there...only if you let him,only if you care.only if you knew that he will be there....sandy |
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Re: THE FEELING I HOLD WITHIN.
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 04:29:48 PM AEST
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Sad, deep and wonderful!
Anne |
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