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- Fatal Waltz -
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 07:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A lovely woman of angelic grace steps onto the white marble floor
Her stormy silver eyes scan the ballroom like a cautious bird
The woman wears a dress of perfect white silk
She elegantly steps onto the white floor
All eyes quickly shift to the angelic beauty
A fetching man emerges from the awestricken crowd
He nobly walks up to the woman and takes her delicate, white gloved hand
A sweet smile fills her fair, gleaming face
He exchanges a childish smile with her
They both gracefully step onto the hauntingly deserted floor
They waltz along the floor, which seems to disappear before them
Deep in the black shadows stands a slender man
A look of sheer evil cursed his sinister face
The woman with her striking eyes catches sight of him
His wicked emerald eyes fell upon the charming woman
A shrieking gasp filled the large ballroom
A piercing arrow found the womans kind heart
A cataclysm of silken, ruby blood surrounds her lithe body
Menacing, horrible laughter can be heard, filling the deserted air
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Crimson_Rose
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2004-01-11 19:53:25]
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Re: - Fatal Waltz -
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 11:26:40 PM AEST
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wow very powerful write.,. its gives you an errie feeling.. I really like it alot.. great job
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Re: - Fatal Waltz -
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:02:38 AM AEST
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its chilling vivid yes now I have goosebumps
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Re: - Fatal Waltz -
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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| I liked this. I don't think it was overly descriptive. I would love to know what brought this on but just as well to keep us guessing. Good write. |
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