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TIME
Contributed by
lowman613
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:06:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Time moves so slow,
when watching the hands,
waiting,wanting to know,
and never to understand,
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Time is of the essence so I'm told,
never waste the time you got,
Time will make us all grow old,
It will tie us all in knots!
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Time passes by so fast,
when were having fun,
so I try to make it last,
before my time is done,
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Time is what we make of it,
so do we choose wise,
sometimes we all forget,
and cover up with lies,
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Sometimes we want to stop the clocks,
or change things by going back in time,
but the world would all be in shock,
and nothing would be just fine,
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So take the time that you got,
and choose wise on how to spend it,
because it will be worth a lot,
the time we don't want to forget!
Copyright ©
lowman613
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Re: TIME
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:44:11 AM AEST
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| Very needed advice..A very good poem..venkat |
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Re: TIME
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 12:53:06 AM AEST
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Beautifully written wisdom :o)
This left me with a good feeling, thank you,
Larry |
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Re: TIME
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:33:32 AM AEST
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time is precious this is great and so true
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Re: TIME
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:11:48 AM AEST
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Very good my friend!
Thanks for all your comments on my work.
this is so very true.
hugs, luv,
emy |
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Re: TIME
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:29:25 AM AEST
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Time once passed as we all know can never be relived, only ever remembered. Your poem has such truth in words. A great poem to read.
Cheers
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