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wish i could disappear somehow
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:15:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it's dark here
but it's dark everywhere
anymore
it's cold here
like a love held beyond it's worth
is this what you really want
or just another obligation?
don't guess it matters
nothing changes
nothing seems to matter now
everything just disappeared somehow
no, nothing seems to matter now
wish i could disappear somehow
everything stays much the same
as you and i play out the game
no winners here, just losers
and witnesses to mutual self-destruction
never thought that
you and i would be
so far away from being "we"
no one else could stop this love
so i had to do it myself
i guess
but it takes two to tear away
so don't save all the blame for me
if i'm the one that killed this love
at least take credit, you videotaped it
i'm nothing more now
than a Hate bomb
owe it to no one
it's all me
don't really care
if it's what i am
then it's what i am
let it be
nothing seems to matter now
everything just disappeared somehow
no, nothing seems to matter now
wish i could disappear somehow
without a shred of "hope" in sight
i guess that it would be alright
for you to say that i'm the reason
that we fell apart, i did it all
nothing will change, it's all the same
no matter where we place the blame
and i can't explain the pain i thought i'd feel
when this day finally came
but now i find i feel Nothing
no sad songs left for me to sing
what would it matter now
it seems far too late
far too late
don't get me wrong
i don't want to lose you
but it seems you are already gone
i "hope" you're happy now
where ever you are
nothing seems to matter now
everything just disappeared somehow
no, nothing seems to matter now
wish i could disappear somehow
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-01-12 02:15:13]
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by MissTea on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:20:41 AM AEST
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so sad, so many silent feeling being spoken!
this poem reminds me of someone i was let go, but in fact i really didn't want to.
very very good poem.
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:30:22 AM AEST
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your sadness reached my very soul
michelle |
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by bluoreo on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:03:05 AM AEST
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| Really good poem. I have had way too many experiences just like that one. Its a wonder i am still here. Keep writing. - eric |
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:06:01 AM AEST
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I feel where you write from, straight from the heart... Sad... Well written poem
Cheers
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:18:04 AM AEST
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This gave me the feeling of being impaled with an iron rod, then struck by an errant bolt of lightning. There's good, then great, then this poem here. Your darkness is superceded only by your talent.
Truly,
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 11:38:43 PM AEST
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this reached out and slapped me like a wet fish except it was slightly more enjoyable than being slapped with a wet creature. I thought this was sad and hope this wasn't about yer wife I found this repetitive in an odd way and thought it was brilliant like everything I have read by yours. Haven't been on in a few days and will read your previous poems later.
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Re: wish i could disappear somehow
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:09:47 PM AEST
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| Dude this one was good. Kinda hit home... In an odd way. Good write. |
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