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i don't know
Contributed by
stitches
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:24:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the scars on my wirst bleed poison memories that choke me yet comfort, somehow knowing almost welcoming the past coming full circle due to try again
comfortable in a sanity that shattered the pieces powdered to nothing tears for what??! the taste of salt i can't even remember why... when vulnerable i see nothing but stupidity is the happiness that's being swallowed by reality of disassociation
my life is a ***** metaphor! why can't this computer crash and end it all
tears fall like moonlight shadowed in the dragon'e eyes burning with desire that "tomorrow" is trying so hard extinguish
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Re: i don't know
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:42:40 AM AEST (User
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Oh nice style! The words show your frastration, really amazing and I loved the ending!!!
tears fall
like moonlight
shadowed in the dragon'e eyes
burning with desire
that "tomorrow" is trying
so hard extinguish
Niceee !!!
Keep on writing!!
Anne ;) |
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Re: i don't know
(User Rating: 1 ) by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 03:23:53 PM AEST (User
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ahhhh... i enjoyed just breathing this in..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: i don't know
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:23:17 AM AEST (User
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I liked this one. It was very interesting. Granted it wasn't quite as dark as some of your other writes it was still good. |
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Re: i don't know
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 10:37:52 PM AEST (User
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this was f*cking beautiful I loved it. Especially the first two lines. I hope to see more from u soon.
Bobo (Joel) |
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